June 30, 2009

Revision That Bleeds.

No, seriously.

THIS IS HOW IT'S DONE, I think.

3 comments:

a. fortis said...

Thank god my Track Changes comments are in BLUE. Far less scary.

Jena said...

Too bad it had to be taken down. (Understandably, the publisher wasn't happy with the in-process document being posted for all to see.)

tanita davis said...

Oh, Jena! Bummer! Boo!
I do guess I take the editor's point, but it was teeeensy and couldn't be made larger. It was just the lines and lines and LINES of red that were sort of both horrifying and edifying -- and reassuring.