tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10890387.post2888655817836742373..comments2023-12-25T00:38:19.500-08:00Comments on Finding Wonderland: The WritingYA Weblog (archive): Poetry Friday: Not CleverSarah Stevensonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16534942492714970282noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10890387.post-33287157142363818192008-08-02T06:23:00.000-07:002008-08-02T06:23:00.000-07:00Charlotte, let's just say no. It didn't happen, an...Charlotte, let's just say no. It didn't happen, and he remembered the rats for the rest of his life.<BR/><BR/>Okay?<BR/><BR/>Cloudscome: just go to Kelly's site (kidlitinformation.blogspot.com) and she always has the whole list of hosts!tanita✿davishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01671822274852087499noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10890387.post-50946528291158344402008-08-01T17:27:00.000-07:002008-08-01T17:27:00.000-07:00I love the ending too!But I wish we'd found out if...I love the ending too!<BR/><BR/>But I wish we'd found out if he did or didn't. I hate it when authors leave me hanging...Charlottehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11835101886202235868noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10890387.post-58017416997544235112008-08-01T13:01:00.000-07:002008-08-01T13:01:00.000-07:00Very cool poem, Tadmack. Thanks for sharing. (An...Very cool poem, Tadmack. Thanks for sharing. (And thanks to Phoenix Sky Harbor for the free internet!!)Kellyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15169707337312707247noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10890387.post-30553943956279218992008-08-01T11:48:00.000-07:002008-08-01T11:48:00.000-07:00The understatement of your photo choice makes me s...The understatement of your photo choice makes me smile.Mary Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09078793537148794310noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10890387.post-6933929042976758042008-08-01T07:28:00.000-07:002008-08-01T07:28:00.000-07:00I agree with jules about the ending. But it made m...I agree with jules about the ending. But it made me giggle... guiltily, as I felt I should have more sympathy for the lad.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10890387.post-36417760855211461962008-08-01T07:18:00.000-07:002008-08-01T07:18:00.000-07:00Is that a rather bah-dum-ching ending, or is it ju...Is that a rather bah-dum-ching ending, or is it just me? (Not BAH-DUM-CHING!!! but sort of bah-dum-ching with a bit of gravity). <BR/><BR/>I love that. Only here would I be reading modern Scottish poetry, but I'm glad. <BR/><BR/>I love the juxtaposition of all those mechanical tools vs. things like the blue and the gorgeous and the "dew-hung spruce." I know, I know, I just said "juxtaposition." Nerd. But it's true.Jules at 7-Imphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14439756778611468303noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10890387.post-81201977040637076782008-08-01T04:27:00.000-07:002008-08-01T04:27:00.000-07:00That's a new one for me too. Perfect turn. I like ...That's a new one for me too. Perfect turn. I like the build up and tension building to the last punch. Thanks for finding this and sharing it!<BR/><BR/>I'm tipping my hat to you for cluing me into where PF is today. I was lost. I'm so glad you are my early morning poetry buddy.Andromeda Jazmonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12355192738014962965noreply@blogger.com